catherinemurder15

It was an interesting chapter!! I like your style of writing. I love the list in the beginning and the sarcasm. It adds slightly, a dark humor to the writing. ...

The chapter was really intriguing. A chapter that will make the reader turn to the next page. I liked your description of the scene very well and how you let ...

Well.. this is definitely a children's stories. A story with a moral to be courageous and use your intellect appropriately. It will be a good bedtime story! In the introduction, ...

I really like the way you have written the story but I think you have over done it because I had to force myself to read it. Otherwise it was ...

:smt023 :smt023 No words! Its totally awesome! How can you write so good? Life and Death. One, an experience enriching you with joy and pain, other relieving you from all. ...

Awesome poetry! It looks like you suffered so much. This poem reminds of Eminem's lyrics. I loved the last two lines. This shows how much you love your mother. Your ...

Your beginning was very good. I feel that you could have made the introduction of the characters and the routine more colorful by being describing the image too. They are ...