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nice job bigbad! just a couple things i noticed a couple of things. here we go! When the wind blew through Eliza’s hair, it only made her more precious. Her ...

hmm i didnt think that was long in fact i thought it was short! you're right, this is freaking awesome! i am in a critiquey mood, so beware. ok now ...

for a first attempt at horror, this was truly... horrifying! very nice, it makes me want to read more. if there is more. the way the mc didnt want any ...

oh... my... grahm crakers! *is speechless*regains speech* That was awesome!!!! whens the next chapter?! man i hate reading these as soon as they come out, then i have to wait ...

it took me forevor to find this post but i found it and now... yeeeaaah!!!! another great chapter bigbad! very nice! the romantic twist was interesting but i think you ...

very nice bigbad! another fantastic chapter this time with lots of suspense! i like the arguements between Landon and his voice (although im not sure when the voice came into ...

wow very good! impressive bigbad *wiggles eyebrow* well since this a crit: here i go: *Author's note* Italics are like an echo, repeating the last few words of the last ...

wow i loved this chapter! i think it perfectly illustrated the self conflict that is sure to become a big part in this story. i like the way you have ...

da da da Dun! well, what happens next?! well anyways this is a critique so i will proceed to point out your errors so you dont have to do it ...

i like this one! the only thing i have to say is that some of the rhymes sounded choppy maybe you could find a way to make it run smoother? ...

well its a little cliche but thats not necessarily as bad a thing as everyone makes it out to be. well here goes: (my writing is in bold) Prologue The ...

this is fantastic! the letter from lacy was perfectly worded, perfectly executed. the first kill, which i think was an important turning point in the story, was also perfect, it ...

:shock: wow... that was awesome! i cant wait until the next one! one question... WHY can't females 'blood' not sustain werewolf blood? Humans all have the same blood, i thought ...

great! the only thing i noticed was one of the first sentences : I was freaked out to the bone. which didnt really make sense. also, the conversation with Lacy ...

wow. wow wow wow wow wow wow. great chapter! awesome! can't wait for the next! the only thing i noticed was you used the same descriptions for him being embarrassed ...