cassidyrose

Okay, just a few short things to say... this was a good start for a story. I love how you ended with the "how should i terrify him", as it ...

For a ten minute write, this was pretty good. Everything rymed, and it followed along greatly. It tells what is really true, and I like that! CassidyRose

I agree... this is in the wrong catagory, it should be in short stories. I have to admit that I was kind of confused with this, it does not make ...

I love this poem! Of course... it is reveiw sunday so go reveiw others! Anyway, this was a good poem, and I love it. I might have to use it ...

omygod this is awesome