cassidyrose

You might as well be saying... "oh Matt, I love you, oh Matt, can you see me? I watch and stalk you every day, and pray you see me... Do ...

2 My parents hadn’t returned home when I got home. I hurriedly stuffed my guitar underneath my bed, put a cardigan on over my ‘slutty’ tank top and grabbed my ...

Okay. I really liked this. I enjoyed reading this chapter, as it has a good plot. A few nitpicks though... This chapter was a little short for my liking, so ...

Love Story Chapter 5: The First Day of School I am going to seperate the point of views on the first day of school in different parts of chapter 5. ...

This part was good. I loved how you incorporate everything. I do have one nitpick though. Even though it doesn't show it, you have some spelling errors. You might want ...

OK, WOW. This was a very good story, and leaves you wanting more. Like everyone else said, CLIFFHANGER!!!!! I also hate cliffhangers, especially when they are on short stories. You ...

This was a good poem. I enjoined reading it, and the fact of what it was at the end was a surprise. I can definitely relate to this poem, and ...

Ok, so I would like to start out by saying I absoulutley love this story. You are a fantastic writer, and your story is perfect. You make everything sound so ...

Chapter 1 Blasted snow , thought Valeryn as he nudged his horse forward through the deep white expanse. His heavy white cloak wasn’t even enough to keep him warm in ...

Perhaps we should not kiss tonight, Beneath the hazy silver light; Intoxicated by the fumes Of cigarettes and cheap perfume. Perhaps we should not dance tonight, Lose ourselves in pulsing ...