casey_kent

I liked this poem. A lot of emotion to it. I am not bothered my the cliche-ish of this. Keep it up!

Wow. I'm glad you changed the title already. Good job! If you need any help, just PM me!

I liked it! Post the next chapters soon!

Maybe if you put this in stanzas it would be a poem. It's nice but use capital letters and correct punctuation marks.

I liked it. IT has a nice message. But maybe you can come up with a better title to it so that people will be convinced to take a look ...

This was hilarious. I can't stop laughing. I'm falling off my chair! hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha...

Wow. This is a really strong poem. I can feel your anger. I hope you're okay.

Pretty good.

First of all, change your title it's 'Despair' dear not 'Dispair'. It has a catchy beat, for a cheer.

This is nice. Make it a song. Just joking.

where are the next chapters? you told me that you would post it. where is it? *motions to go to your house* I'll go there today if you won't post ...

Good poem. Really emotional.

AAWW. I enjoyed this poem. Beautiful but sad. I Like it. A star for you!

It was an awesome poem. But I wanted to know who is the one narrating? Wife or husband?

Wow. I liked your poem. It was nice and touching. Nice job. Post more poems. Don't be shy!