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Harsh review ahead. Don't read if not inclined. I'm sorry, but this is such pathetic ego-wank, you know? It screams "there, you won! are you happy now, hmph?!" with the ...

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What's the proper medical term for "psychopathic"? As far as I understand, psychopathy is still a proper term in the medical books.

- Sure, but wasn't it stated that Madder doesn't remember anything? Why would she remember microscopes and not her name? - When I was writing the review, I missed the ...

So.... considering the double-negative, you care that Rosey Unicorn is interesting?

It's my pleasure as always. Having re-read the story again, I definitely see what you're saying about the transformation aspect of it. The bit with the hard "r" in Maori, ...

(I'm reposting this as a comment, as I already got points for it from here ) Very good. I really didn't see the twist there; I found myself saying out ...

YMMV: Your Mileage May Vary, an acronym sometimes used as a warning that different people might have different opinions about something. I shall send you a PM at some point ...

Sorry, that's what I meant. Only Terence could see him. Well, once again, the question becomes whether you're writing mystery or humour in that case, and I'm still left with ...

Oh, so that in Abracadaver WAS a hallucination! The reason I didn't review it is because I felt I was missing something out. Was it really a ghost? Was it ...

Yes, I understood that his lack of respect for feelings is a facade. I also understood that his hallucination made him miss Bob. The problem is that there wasn't really ...

... Baby, don't hurt me; don't hurt me, no more.

This isn't really a haiku.

This poem evokes bitterness; it describes an aching, festering sliver, one which could entirely be avoided. I have been in the same situation the poem describes, and I am glad ...

Hate's not a good emotion to hang onto. No like from me.