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Re: Burning up (Second edit)
I see you've expanded the story a little bit. It is now a fact that everyone experiences the moon fever. I'm glad you clear this up, but - and I ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Inside of a Star [Prologue]
"Mom?" I called out, as I opened the front door to the house that I onced once lived in. I probably should have been working on my paper for one ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Prompts
Thanks Idry! Loved your story, very cute and a tad touching. Also, I love how it was dedicated to me. :D Makes me feel all warm and tingly inside!
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: A Resignation (For Three-Pronged Contest)
cC here to re-review, as promised! :D A few nitpicks. First off, I'm not sure who this letter is addressing (I know it says "to whom it may concern", but ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: The Photo
Umm.... Not to be mean or anything, but I read this somewhere else on the Internet a year ago (4chan to be precise). This is a pretty famous urban legend.
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Ash
First, what's a shambler? Can you describe it a bit more. All I get is that it's a machine, that has a propeller and three legs. What type of machine ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Rhealism part 2
The morning they headed to the vineyard by Pencarrow Head, Cero imagined a developed village with three or four factories, a cosy villa for them to stay and a pub ...
Oct 16, 2010
