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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Burning up (Second edit)

    I see you've expanded the story a little bit. It is now a fact that everyone experiences the moon fever. I'm glad you clear this up, but - and I ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Inside of a Star [Prologue]

    "Mom?" I called out, as I opened the front door to the house that I onced once lived in. I probably should have been working on my paper for one ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Prompts

    Thanks Idry! Loved your story, very cute and a tad touching. Also, I love how it was dedicated to me. :D Makes me feel all warm and tingly inside!

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A Resignation (For Three-Pronged Contest)

    cC here to re-review, as promised! :D A few nitpicks. First off, I'm not sure who this letter is addressing (I know it says "to whom it may concern", but ...

    Nov 25, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Photo

    Umm.... Not to be mean or anything, but I read this somewhere else on the Internet a year ago (4chan to be precise). This is a pretty famous urban legend.

    Nov 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Ash

    First, what's a shambler? Can you describe it a bit more. All I get is that it's a machine, that has a propeller and three legs. What type of machine ...

    Oct 27, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rhealism part 2

    The morning they headed to the vineyard by Pencarrow Head, Cero imagined a developed village with three or four factories, a cosy villa for them to stay and a pub ...

    Oct 16, 2010


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