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Re: (If only you were) Mine
I want you to understand Good first lie I want you to touch my hand with your hand. I really like this line it really made me feel warm Because ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: The Ice Sculpture
I realy like this poem very well done. All I would say is that it seemed to drag on so many just change the structre because it made it abit ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Tempting Fate
I lie here in this dreaming state. Too often had I tempted fate. nice start i really like the opening you have already got me trapped like a rapist and ...
Oct 24, 2010
