car1y23

Hey there! I thought this short story was brilliant. It was so clever and moving so great work! Until a few paragraphs in I didn't realise that it was the ...

Thanks so much for the review - they're really good points too :D

Thank you so much for the review :) I see what you mean about it feeling unfinished ... i'm definitely going to see if I can change that :D

haha don't worry I do the same ... it's so easy not to notice them too :D

thank you very much for your review :) They're really good points too so thank you :D

Good points :) thanks so much!! :)