captain.classy

Hey there! This poem was alright. It would be better if you kept with the windowsill theme, or at least had a legitimate reason as to why you went of ...

Hey there! So this was interesting. I think that you might have rushed it a bit, but that's ok if that's what you want to do. If you want to ...

Hey there! This has to be one of the saddest things I have read on YWS. My heart sank with your last few sentences. Since this is one big clump ...

Hey there! I thought this was good. It moved a bit fast, but I liked that for the simple fact that it is a short story, and they aren't supposed ...

Hey there again! Sorry this review did not follow the other. The site crashed on me! Anyways... Quotes 'N' Comments “I've had enough. I've so had enough,” she hisses to ...

Woah! This is crazy good. Since Pink already did the nitpicks, I'm going to give a few opinions on things. I think this is amazing, really. I know there is ...

Hey there! You're my first review on review day! Aren't you lucky. Anyways, this piece is great. It contains a great amount of imagery, and the words seem to flow ...

Hey girl! Not much to review, but I'm going to do the best I can to help ya out here. Quotes 'N' Comments (I told you about her, remember?) Argh ...

Hey there! You're a helpful reviewer, so I just thought I'd return the favor, or repay you for being a great reviewer. I don't know what I'm saying, on to ...

Hahaha. Grammar Woah buddy! Ok, so Isha covered the punctuations within dialogue mistakes, but I just thought I should link you in case you're confused. by Demeter Read through this ...

Hey there! Here as requested (thanks for it by the way). Quotes 'n' Comments fingers wringing and knotting , gnawing his nails down to ragged red splinters All of these ...

Hey there! Finally here. Quotes 'n' Comments My father was at my side, guiding me towards the front of the sanctuary. So, I realize that 'sanctuary' is the right word ...

El, my wife, I'm here for your requested review! Quotes 'n' Comments Despite the torn and blood-stained bandages which covered her head and stomach, plus two linen cloths which concealed ...

Hey there! Here as promised. I honestly didn't find the dream or non-dream part confusing or in need of rewriting. I think you did a good job. As I was ...

Hey there! Let me start off by saying that this is a wonderful idea. Your descriptions of the town were good, and gave me a nice image of what was ...