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Yeah, I think I will..... Thanks for the review. I'm just not sure whom she should be talking to, apart from herself. :lol:

Oooh, yeah. Thanks. I'll get to work on that right away.... About that first paragraph, I see what you mean.... and I don't know how it happened. :oops: It used ...

Haha, I don't think so...... :lol: It took us a month to settle on it!

Good point........:lol:

Why? I think I'd rather keep it myself, but with that other meaning..... I dunno. I'm pretty attached to it. :lol:

Thanks everyone! I think I might post the next bit once I edit it. Fangala: Your suggestions are very helpful. There is one sentence that does mention that he gets ...

Thanks soo much!!!! I'll try to add more action to this part. :D About the pain in her leg, she IS a wolf in her dreams, but in the end ...

Thanks! I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind. Gwenevire: Good Idea! I'll get to work on that.... :D Fangala: Yeah, I know. Sorry it was hard to read, but the ...

Oops, Thanks. :D

Hmm, this may have already been said, but this is the "Prologue" of what? It would get more reviews if it had a title. :D

I'm surprised that more people haven't reviewed this, I thought it was pretty good. :D

Guess not... Now I feel hurt..... :) Thanks anyway, Azila. :D

Oh, yeah I wrote A short story with the name Tala a while ago. I guess I could recycle it! I'm pretty sure I'm going to use Wenonah, just because ...

Oh. Well... I guess there are multiple ways of pronouncing it. :D I usually say it "Day-yous" I actually just changed her name, after re-looking up it's origins. I originally ...

Thanks all! I've also posted two bits after this, if you want to read them. Snoink: Thanks! I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind. I used this for NaNo, and ...