canislupis

Thanks. :) What you've said is very helpful, and I'll get around to editing it as soon as possible. :)

Yes.... It does. :) I don't know how this keeps happening. :) Thanks!

Thanks Camille! I have edited most of the things you mentioned. Whether it's missing something or not, I still like this. With your permission, I'd like to print out the ...

Thank you! Any suggestions on how to make that one part a bit slower and easy to understand? I welcome any comments/and/or suggestions! Thank you for the review.

From what I read, this seems like pretty good writing, but I really think you need to break it up into smaller bits, space it out more, and change it ...

Thanks!!!!! That was helpful. I'll work on the stuff you mentioned. See ya! Thanks for the review.

Thanks!!!!!!!!! If you are interested, the next three bits are also up. Thanks for posting!

Ahhh..... I see. Now, reading through it again, There are a few spots. Im pretty sure its ok in some of them though....... I'll fix the ones I find. ;) ...

And.... Edited again! I am now going through my pieces one by one doing some extensive editing. I welcome commetns and suggestions from everyone!!!!!!!!! Part 2 is also now up, ...

Quote: As I helped the lady who was first in line to get her young children onto the deck, I was also scanning the waiting people for a sign of ...

Pleased to meet YOU!! (Again) :) Thanks you for the review, It was definitely helpful. I haven't actually decided where this is taking place, but it obviously is in the ...

:D Can't wait!

Thanks for the review! I will go and review your piece as soon as I have time. :D The caribou got away, because the pack was distracted as their leader ...

Wow! Thanks....... About the little old man part, he is one of the main characters. I think I am going to connect everything and have him be the reason most ...

Thanks for the review! It was very helpful. About the thirty chapters part, I said this was onely part one of two.... :) But I guess the same thing would ...