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canislupis

  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Artemis Fowl

    I love them.... They're really funny and original, also the characters seem to have depth. The audio books are SOOO much better though, because of the awesome narrator. The writing ...

    Mar 3, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Wolf Brother, Spirit Walker, Soul Eater.

    YES! I read them... There are three of them now... I think. They are really really dark, and very bloody, especially the first one. But overall, I liked them.

    Mar 3, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: [deleted]

    I liked them... Sortof. I really liked his idea, and the way it was presented.... But the writing wasn't really my style.

    Mar 3, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: NN -- Prologue

    Gasp! My nickname is Lyla.... :) I'll get you a review soon....

    Feb 28, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Totems 2

    And..... Edited! I hope I got everything. Reviews please?

    Feb 27, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Spirit of the forest

    Wow........... That was fast! I'll edit when I have time. ;) Thank you everyone for your amazingly helpful reviews! If any of you want a critique, PM me!!!!!!! ~Lupis

    Feb 27, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Alphess: part one [revised as of 2008/03/11]

    Hmmph.... I don't have time to do a proper critique at the moment, but I'll work on it and get back to you.... I promise! :)

    Feb 27, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: A Wrinkle in Time

    I found it a bit dry in some parts, and hard to get through. Still, she is an amazing writer, and the idea was really unique. I highly recommend this ...

    Feb 17, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: A Single Shard

    I read this almost four years ago, but I also listened to it on tape a few weeks ago with my family. Amazing book! Like Azila said, it really makes ...

    Feb 17, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ---

    Ah... I see. Well, the spacing is much better now. for some reason when copying and pasting from microsoft word or any other type program, YWS takes out a few ...

    Feb 8, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Journals of Winter

    canis >> Thanks! I'l fix those things. And Maude is a mutt: german shepard/border-collie/black lab mix. Awwww. :) She sounds really cute. I have a mutt too!

    Feb 6, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Totems 4

    Thanks! I will edit when I have time....

    Feb 6, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Isolation

    Thanks!

    Feb 3, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Isolation

    Thanks! Gryphon: Thanks you for the review, it was very helpful. :) Azila: Thanks! I'll try to remember. I can’t understand them, but I don’t think there is anything wrong ...

    Feb 2, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Isolation

    Aparrrently so. *sigh* I am going through and hopefully fixing more tense changes now. I guess I'm just not really used to writing in present, and it doesn't really come ...

    Feb 1, 2008


The thing about plummeting downhill at fifty miles an hour on a snack platter - if you realize it's a bad idea when you're halfway down, it's too late.
— Rick Riordan, The Son of Neptune