canislupis

Hi there! This was proofread well, which was nice (for a change) and I enjoyed reading it. I do have a couple quick things to add though: 1. Animal Emotions ...

Watching as if through a glass. Incomplete sentence here. You can get away with them sometimes, but it feels awkward for a first sentence. Who is watching? I smile and ...

Hey Skins! I can't believe I'm first again! I only have about ten minutes before they turn the internet off, so I'll make this quick. Charlie did seem a little ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this. This subject in general bothers me (and a lot of people) and I think it´s great that you want to write about it. ...

Yes! First! Anyway, after reading up to this point, I'm still engrossed in the story, which is good, and I love your character, which is even better. I feel like ...

Hi Azila! I don't actually have time for a review right now, but before I go, here are a few of my first thoughts upon reading this: 1. Gender and ...

Hello! Sorry this took so long. Now, I think Wolf covered the nitpicks already, so I'm not going to go here. I like this story--the idea of a resistence movement ...

Hi! Here is the requested review, and sorry it took so long. xD Holiday craziness, and all that. It’s still cold. It’s the 14th of July, but it’s a freezing ...

Charlie  Austin told me that I’d forget about it. He said that it didn’t matter. He said that running would stop my mind from crashing. Austin lied. My best mate ...

Crack. It sounded from behind him, yet yet? Unnecessary word. struck his back with a piercing snap. The wince that was soon to follow Try “his wince brought... brought a ...

Right, Yuri, here is your review! First, I did some nit-picky stuff line by line. Edited version is in the spoilers, comments in bold. :D Your heart is beating fast. ...

Hi there, Meep:)! I'm going to try not to repeat what others have already said. I love the way you executed this piece, and the idea was touching to say ...

Hello! I don't think I've ever seen something of yours before, so this should be fun! I think the others have got most of the typos, so I just have ...

Hi! Here to review as requested. My first thoughts, upon reading this, were "uh-oh, another fantasy in which the female MC must prove her worthiness/another fantasy in which the main ...

Hi there! I love this--it's very cute, and the writing's stunning. I just got tripped up in one spot: But what I don’t know is that, once the tears dry ...