camillefalgout

Thank you so much! That is very true you described me.

Okay I edited it.. would you mind letting me know of any more flaws?

I tried to edit the document.. let me know if you think its any better?

Okay cool! Thanks so much

Okay I love this poem. It is short, but I really understand it. Like I really love what it is about!!! The only thing is I think you meant to ...

I love this poem! It is so lighthearted and funny. I also love how you only rhymed the second and fourth lines in the stanzas, i think it sounds better ...

Oh okay thank you!

Thank you so much! I will definitely check out your story.. :)

Okay I will try to fix those things, thanks so much for your feedback!

This is a very strong poem, I like it. I like how you use all of these hidden messages, in a way, to describe time. I think your wording is ...

Thank you so much for your advice! I tried to fix the flaws.. could you let me know if there's anything else?

I really like this poem. I like how you formed it into a prayer, it brings a sweet tone to the piece. I like the imagery you used as well, ...

I'm not very sure what you are trying to say through the poem, but I understand the wording, I just don't get the overall point. Don't get me wrong, it ...

This is such a funny poem! I really like it, because it is an easy and lighthearted read. And, of course, everyone likes pizza so it appeals to most all ...

This short really appealed to me. The idea of a girl dancing in rain is a happy thought, and I like it. My only suggestions are watch your spelling and ...