callmeLily73

I love your story! you need to write more! seriously! I am very exciuted to read more! It is very creative and interesting and I was completly absorbed by the ...

I love the origenality and the creativity of your story!!!!!!!! It really made me read at he edge of my seat!!!!!!!!!! It is a fastinating story! Now im in the ...

This did catch my attenchtion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You need to write a story on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have to see where this goes!!!!!!!!!!!!! this could be the basis of a best seller!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Messag

you must write more! I'm serious! I was completely absorbed in the story and forgot what was happening around me! This is an amazing story and I have to read ...

I love your story! But what an immature jerk! Now I'm mad at that boy! seriously, I really think that kid should be hit with a bat, or ran over ...

I like your poem. It has a beat like a song and rhymes really well. I seem to chant it, as I'm reading, and I cant stop! it's worth repeating! ...

I love it! your story really captured my in. I was completely absorbed and I could see everything so vividly! you have such great talent! Are you planning on publishing ...

I love your story! I love that you chose two people who don't have something most people do. You should write from the beginning, write how they met, and how ...

write a story around this! This is really good! It captures my mind and makes me want to know more! I cant wait until you write further, tell the whole ...

I love your story! it totally makes me jump off my seat! I was absorbed so much in the story that I for got all about what was happening around ...

I love your story! I might sound like an ELA teacher but it has nice use of adjectives and discripsions! I was completly absorbed into the story as if it ...

I love yur story! Its truley a origanal. But maybe adding something to this The truck’s getting closer but the weird thing is it seems like everything’s slower will make ...

I love your story! Its really touching how two people who have gone through a world of hurt find eachouther! :smt057 I cant even imagine the stess they go through! ...

First, I love the name of the caracter. Very cool name. Second, I love the story, I love how you bring a girl in depression into a world of love. ...

I love your love triangle story! It has me jumping! I'm anxios to find whos with whom, and what happens! I like how your stories combinded! It's like destiny!! I ...