cade3lit

Thinking about writing more to this but have not started because I have a lot on my plate right now in terms of writing. I have written other screenplays if ...

Good, i wish i could give some specific details of what to do better but i do not have the time. possibly i will be back to do so. I ...

Good, the first stanza I think it should be known not know. Well written but you could use some similies or metaphors to better capture the moments you "share" with ...

Okay so I changed the whole poem basically... It is a lot different although not perfect seeing as how I have once again only written this in a mere ten ...

To me, it seems like this poem could be a lot more descriptive. Right now, it seems fairly vague and plain. Your word choice is average and you are telling ...

Thanks, I'll work on it and post again soon...most likely tonight? I'll let you know.

First of all, I would like to thank you for such a detailed and helpful review. I am still a young writer and learning certain techniques and strategies. This is ...