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Love is horrible,powerful and unstoppable. It rips at your insides, it makes you bleed without touching you. Makes you cry without you wanting to, It makes you love without you ...

What do you think? I came up with it in about ten minutes during class. Long Fuzzy Socks -------> I would omit this O, long fuzzy socks, what would life ...

To me, it seems like this poem could be a lot more descriptive. Right now, it seems fairly vague and plain. Your word choice is average and you are telling ...

Good, although you start out with lines that are kind of choppy and short then progress to longer lines that are almost full sentences. I don't know if you meant ...

I think you could use more language to describe really how you feel. Right now, this is just telling us, smacking us over the head with your feelings. Last stanza ...

So I clicked on this story in hopes of giving a opionated reveiw and realized I don't have much to say! Although there is some confusion in the middle of ...