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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Haha yep, hardcore editing session has just been initiated. :P I'll keep your comments in mind, again, thank you :)

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya, thank you so much for the review :) I know at the moment it's not the most exciting thing in the world, trust me I'm literally thinking the same ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    Ahhh, okay, I'll try to make that a bit more clear as well then :)

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    Thank you so much for the review, I completely understand where you're coming from on pretty much every point you have made, I'll try and swap some things around to ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    Awesome, I can completely see what you mean, and maybe flashbacks are the way forward, I shall have a think about it, I can actually think of a couple of ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    hello again *waves* Thanks for reviewing this one too, I appreciate it :) Okay, so I can totally understand where you're coming from, I actually agree about the whole suspense ...

    Sep 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 1 part 2/2

    Okay so I completely understand what you mean about the beginning, I think it's one of those things that seems like a good idea at the time but now that ...

    Sep 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 1 part 2/2

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad that you were able to grasp what was going on, and seem to like it :). I completely understand what you ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    Cheers priceofwords :) The werewolf is the my evil guy of choice in this so far, so he should be popping up more, I was thinking of writing this so ...

    Aug 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Humor Re: New York

    Awesome, I'll watch out for it :)

    Aug 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Xynophen

    Yeah, I liked your ending, it was a nice twist :)

    Aug 6, 2015


What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
— J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye