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Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1
Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1
Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1
Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1
Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1
Haha yep, hardcore editing session has just been initiated. :P I'll keep your comments in mind, again, thank you :)
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1
Hiya, thank you so much for the review :) I know at the moment it's not the most exciting thing in the world, trust me I'm literally thinking the same ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1
Ahhh, okay, I'll try to make that a bit more clear as well then :)
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1
Thank you so much for the review, I completely understand where you're coming from on pretty much every point you have made, I'll try and swap some things around to ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1
Awesome, I can completely see what you mean, and maybe flashbacks are the way forward, I shall have a think about it, I can actually think of a couple of ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1
hello again *waves* Thanks for reviewing this one too, I appreciate it :) Okay, so I can totally understand where you're coming from, I actually agree about the whole suspense ...
Sep 15, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 1 part 2/2
Okay so I completely understand what you mean about the beginning, I think it's one of those things that seems like a good idea at the time but now that ...
Sep 15, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 1 part 2/2
Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad that you were able to grasp what was going on, and seem to like it :). I completely understand what you ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1
Cheers priceofwords :) The werewolf is the my evil guy of choice in this so far, so he should be popping up more, I was thinking of writing this so ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: New York
Awesome, I'll watch out for it :)
Aug 6, 2015 -
Re: Xynophen
Yeah, I liked your ending, it was a nice twist :)
Aug 6, 2015
