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Re: Blue Sky
Good writing skill you got there and i like the title though when i clicked on it i didnt expact it to be this, site in the early 90s. Your ...
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Re: No Happy Ever After
I think your poem is really good. I liked the part ta the end where he disappears and it makes you wonder why he left and where, alll in all ...
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Re: Mermaids
This is good. You have good writing skills, but needs work like what the last post said the words are off balance and the syllables are kind of off but ...
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Re: Little paws
Nice poem,And the title is very catchy made me want to read it. Keep up the good work and keep on writing
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Re: Echoes
Looks good so far but it needs work and i mean alote
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Re: The Concept of Fears
"jock where are you, jock?"
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Re: FGM paper
that was informative cha
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Re: Shortchanged
hey good job\\\\\\
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Re: unkept secrets
OMG! this is amazing you have some real skills keep up the good work. overall:110/100
Jun 8, 2011