brotherGeo

Thanks for the review mate! I agree there are lot of things that went to fast in the earlier chapters and I plan on revising them maybe cutting them up ...

I got a lot more where that came from so don't worry.

Thanks comrade Harry for the review its very helpful! also i prefer harsh and in depth reviews so i appreciate your review a lot, thanks mate!

Thanks Icy, I appreciate your review

Thanks myth I appreciate the advice, I'm glad you like it!

Cheers mate!

Thanks for the review comrade!

Just another tip, if you can evade the cops, your experience will be better. * caution consequences will be much worse but the thrill is great.

I am loving the story so far. i only joined YWS recently and your content was the first i checked out. keep it up your this story is interesting and ...