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Re: The Night Witch - Chapter 1: Natalya (May 1931)
Hello Comrade! Another great chapter and introducing a new character too, its nice to hear from the soviets. There may be a bit of nitpicking in this, so sorry in ...
Jul 25, 2020 -
Re: Chapter One - The Chopping Block
You know what, screw it i'll review this too. *clears throat* Hello comrade! As you know i have reviewed your other chapter's but not this one so i may as ...
Jul 24, 2020 -
Re: Lost Identity and The Mute Child (Tales of Yasuke 1 & 2)
Hello Comrade! Welcome to YWS. A very interesting start to a story, introducing multiple different characters across different times in different places I've never seen it done before. I also ...
Jul 24, 2020 -
Re: Conquest of Shadows Chapter 1
Hello Comrade! I just read the prologue and this an excellent first chapter. It makes me wonder what was going on in the prologue. interesting new characters i hope to ...
Jul 24, 2020 -
Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.2
Hello Comrade! A good second chapter. Heaps of setting the stage for what to come, leaving me on the edge of my seat wanting more. “Then moving on to space ...
Jul 23, 2020 -
Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.1
Hello Comrade! Ah yes, some sci-fi been a while since i read some of this stuff. good to be back in the genre. anyway, you had an excellent start it ...
Jul 23, 2020 -
Re: The President Committed a Bank Heist
Hello Comrade! Ah American politics, the thing is i wouldn't be surprised if this actually happened. This is why i'm glad i get to live with boring Australian politics and ...
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: Chapter Three - Red Eyes
Hello Comrade! The one and only Bleak falls barrow, I could just see your characters fighting through it's halls, I've cleared that place so many times. They were all that ...
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: Enarum: Lost Souls, Calm Aftermath (chapter 2)
Hello comrade! Well well well isekai time. I just read the first chapter and now i am here, and i must say an interesting start. well written and the words ...
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: Enarum: Lost Souls, Before the beginning (chapter 1)
Hello Comrade! Plenty of reviews here already but i'll add a few things. A well written piece, flow was immaculate, overall a well detailed and thought out first chapter. “I ...
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: The Girl in The White Dress
Hello comrade! Wow what a good story, short and sweet. Well written and the words flow easily, good stuff. You displayed the characters well and the eeriness of the swamp ...
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: The Night Witch - Prologue: Max (October 1942)
Hello Kamerad! What an intriguing first chapter, the perspective of a German soldier is excellent too and not done enough i reckon. The German town/city littered with Nazi propaganda that's ...
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: End of History - Chapter One
Hello comrade! An excellent first chapter. You really caught the melancholy vibe of a post apocalyptic world, also environment description is amazing, i reckon you got the setting down to ...
Jul 22, 2020 -
Re: The Tale of Souls - Prologue and Chapter One
Hello Comrade! I don't have to much to add problem wise, but i'll point a few things out. Overall really well written, and the flow of the text is excellent. ...
Jul 21, 2020 -
Re: Chapter Two - A Dragon Tongue's Confliction
Hello comrade! i just read your first chapter and then this one and wow, not bad. As a fellow Skyrim fan I really like reading elder scrolls fan fictions. I ...
Jul 21, 2020
