broadwaystar

This was very interesting. More please (:

I have already seen this one somewhere on here. The beginning of this is a great way to start something off, but it needs more emotion and expression. Also, please ...

Very good piece of work. I think that you shoul have added a little more emotion. I like how the mirror was used.

Wow. Great emotion and feeling. This was concluded in a great style and it stayed relevantly to the point. Great job. Keep it up. -Macy Sene'e

Thanks for your help. I will try to make these as interesting as possible. In fact, this one I wrote three years ago. I just finished another book that I ...