briggsy1996

Hi there, I'm really here to critique, just to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of your story. It is excellently written, and I found myself completely hooked even ...

Hey there, I'm not an expert on critiquing, and I think anything I could have said has already been mentioned above anyhow. However, I am extremely curious about what is ...

Oh my goodness, I love this! It was the title that reeled me in, and I was not disappointed. I wasn't expecting the ending and it really caught me by ...

Hey, I am really enjoying your story- I think you have a fantastic idea going! I don't have any nitpicking, aside from one little thing: I wasn’t an angry person ...

Hey Keren, I don't have any critiquing about this first chapter, but I am overwhelmed by curiosity about what's going to happen in this story. I liked how you started ...

Hey there- This story reeled me in from the first paragraph, and didn't disappoint throughout. It really made me think a lot about my life, and how I can relate. ...

I Just wanted to comment that this is such a powerful poem- I read it over and over, unable to stop. The imagery is excellent! I especially admired the last ...