bradsk88

Write what you wish, just don't become this forum's Amanda Ros

In good literature (read: stories people WANT to read) characters don't talk like real people do. They make no grammatical errors and they carry the most carefully worded conversations you ...

....... yeah, I see what you're saying, it's kind of rough. I'll have another stab at this.

Thanks a lot. I was hoping someone might mention the proper punctuation for dialogue 'cause I hardly put any thought into it, both sound right to me even though I ...

Finally! This story is going somewhere. Okay so I'll start with the good stuff, bad stuff later. There are a lot of good word choices here, like I said before, ...

I find it so interesting, and also so frustrating that people are making the same comments about my pace being too slow. I've been writing this in standard 4"x6" pages, ...

I was hoping if I wrote it like a three year old you'd take it as the sarcasm it is, I hold nothing against you :P Also, yeah this is ...

Yeah, I won't be revising this, nor really paying any regard to it. Just wanted some opinions for the sake of opinions. Thanks.

Might be a bit of a spoiler, maybe not. But this chapter introduces almost ALL of the supporting characters, so no worries about that in chapters to come. And from ...

They're not on the moon ;) If you would believe it, this is my fourth attempt at writing the same story. On one of those attempts I did exactly what ...