borntobeawriter

I'm going to be very blunt here and say that I didn't appreciate your reply to our comments. We went through the effort of pointing out where you could work ...

Thanks everyone! Yes, I'm finally in the right direction! :D

Hey everyone! Wow, I'm so glad you all liked this so much! Pink - I groaned at first when you said I should make it a bit more formal. I ...

haha, Emma, I actually saw those mistakes but my mind refused to acknowledge it. It was yelling at me: "You're wrong! You're tired! Your eyes deceive you! This is EMMA ...

Emma, Pink, thank you! Your reviews are helpful and appreciated, as usual. I'm so glad that you had only slight nit-picking! yay! Tanya :D

I mean, don't leave us again. You'll be sending me PM's to review and I'll be like, huh? Who are you? Emma who? Nope, doesn't ring a bell! :P lol ...

Suz - thanks a lot. Need to rework this. Will you read it when I'm done? Love you !

To all of you who have reviewed; thank you for helping make my writing better every day. Tanya :D With your foot stuck in the sand?” A dark brow rose ...

Thank you for the review Tanya. I'll fix the things that you mentioned. Okay, what you said is exactly what I was afraid of when posting this. Working with two ...

Hey everyone, thanks for the reviews! It gets a wee bit discouraging to put so much work in a piece and realise it needs so much more work. But I'm ...

Smaur. Wow. That was a very helpful review, thank you! Tanya

Thanks Dark, Wow, that's so sweet, so rewarding to be told that! Thank you and keep on writing! Tanya

Pink's back! Yay! Thanks a whole lot! No, I managed to cut a bit off so that I ended with some leeway - 3500 words. Thanks, Pink, I'll let you ...

Evi, thank you! Meh! Short stories are a pain to work with but I think it will be worth it in the end. Thanks to all my reviewers also! Tanya ...

Buggy - thank you so much! I need to work on the story, I know, thanks for the great advice! Tanya