borntobeawriter

Ok, I'm so late here but I'm here. Classy, I had read the two first parts and never came back to see them. I'm ashamed of myself. I had really ...

Ok, so this is basically the same piece as before and I enjoy it as much, especially since we now have some background on Melanie. I really only have one ...

Hum, Pink? Did you perhaps forget to tell everyone you had posted the edit of this chapter and written a second? LOL Seriously, loved this chapter, I did notice a ...

Hi there BottomlessEyes, I'm Tanya, nice to 'meet' you :D I started reading and groaned out loud thinking 'not another one of these fallen angels stories' but you brought in ...

Lauren, I really really enjoyed this. I did notice a few mistakes, but it's simply like you fought with the space bar and lost . .. Just reread it and ...

Hey Lauren, Great Chapter! I'm really enjoying this lovely tale so far. As far as 'grammar' mistakes, I only noticed one: The conversation didn’t help to keep the nightmare at ...

Oh no! Don't change it to 'an ungrateful bunny' because we might suspect the end before! I don't know if what Teague said was true, but I didn't look for ...

Hi there Light-Devil, Wow, great piece! I was hooked and moved. I loved the way this kid describes the fights between the parents, very nicely done. I couldn’t stand it ...

Hi there Apple, I'm Tanya and here goes my review! I stared up at the watch tower; moss covered the crevices with a dark green colour casting long shadows across ...

Haha, I really enjoyed this but I was confused a time or two. I didn't know whether Susana was an adult or a child. Didn't know if she really expected ...

Hi there SnickerDooly, I'm obviously here to do a review. I'm going to have to agree with Conrad; cut the last part. In my opinion, it would be much better ...

I think RH might be right about the copyright thing. I wasn't sure when I first read it but I recall famous authors who had to pay for the right ...

Hi Rh! I just read this chapter and so far I enjoy it very much. It's an unusual beginning and I find myself wanted the next chapter, and then the ...

Hi there Ranger Hawk! I just finished reading your first chapter and it was most excellent. Now, the second. I absolutely loved this chapter, loved the flow and the easygoing ...

I really have to agree with ForestQueen here! Loved the essay and the easygoing reading. I love and smiled and chuckled and I definitely suggest you make more of these. ...