borntobeawriter

Back again for the second review!! So!” Mr. Landsin exclaimed, slamming a dusty old book down on his desk, and peering at us over his tiny glasses. The smell wafted ...

Hey there Kerza, I'm Tanya, here for a review! “Oh, really?” I asked Vincent as I put my backpack on the living room floor, beside the couch. “Yes, I could ...

Hey there Shadowlight! Dude, you have issues with Pink! LOL Seriously, great work. The story has its issues, but they were already commented on. I must say that this is ...

Hey Pink! Welcome back friend! Here's a few nitpicks, So…if I calculated correctly, the total amount of this fine looking dress, with the twenty percent off, plus the extra fifty ...

Hey there Zibbie! Like Lauren said before me, it was a good intriguing start to a story, but a confusing one I found. I mean, Lauren's right; at some points, ...

Oh wow! I'd love to have someone start a critique of my work this way but that's not important here lol :lol: Very beautifully written, very evocative. I could clearly ...

I'm first, I'm first, I'M FIRST ! Ok, Issues, I know lol Except for your headache does everyone seem normal Yes, tell me, how does everyone seem? Everything, maybe? I ...

Well hello there! I'm glad I found this chapter in the forum. I really like this story and it's a pleasure following it. But would you pm me for the ...

Hi Shubhi, Ok, the nitpicks were pretty much pointed out. I wanted to mention one thing though. Amanda says that she lets the stupid urchins touch her. I was under ...

Hi there Shubhi! I'm here for a review, as requested. I hope it will be helpful :D She won’t kill me, I mumbled to myself. This should not be part ...

Hi there Jokerless, I'm Tanya, here for a review :D Elsa felt as though the wind was chasing her, she could hear the and honking and general noise that emitted ...

Great job and I'm the first reply! Woohoo! Well, I just read it like 30 minutes ago so I could review it for you but I checked out what you ...

Hey there Ranger Hawk! As far as the climbing up the wall part. I read the icicle thing and thought, "Are you kidding me?" I think it's a good idea ...

Hey! You were supposed to mention that I was the first review...And that I pointed out something you hadn't noticed; that Tony and Crys now have something in common, they ...

Hey Sionarama, I saw there were 17 views but no comment and I decided to rectify, so, here I am! I'm not sure if this is meant as a short ...