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Re: The Haunting of Elly Rose
Wow. And Eww. You have creepy dreams, daughter. I don't know what to say. Did you want a review for this? I don't get why the dude asked how the ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Let's Just Say...
Hey there Emoinpink, Thanks for the request! I think Tiger was giving me too much credit. *smiles* At first, I thought like Tiger that none of this made sense. Then, ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: The Stargazer {part 2 }
Hey Pointe! Here as requested! But next time, I would prefer if you would post on my WRFF thread (link in my signature) and post the link also; easier for ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Captive: Chapter 1 (Re-done)
Hey there Jenny, Back for chapter 1! ;) It surprised Matthias that he was sweating on such a cold day. He could see a blood stain down the left side ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Captive (Part IV)
Hi there Jenny, Thanks for letting me know about this! :D He woke to the soft morning light with the boy cradled against him. Light streamed in through the window. ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]
Hey Meep! Thanks for the request. I have no nitpicks, at all. The End. Haha, seriously, I loved this piece. It was simple and beautiful, and you showed us how ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Kelsey; Yowzer! It would be swell if you could 'slip up' on some mistakes to make it look like I'm actually reviewing you. ;) Seriously, I found no mistakes at ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: The Wild Ones Ch3 & Ch4
Why is it that I wasn't told about this one? :'( ah, well. Just read all four of your chapters. As for nitpicks, the reviewer before me did a thorough ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Crux - Edited
Jent, this was brilliant! If I hadn't know it was for a contest, I wouldn't have guessed. If I had to nitpick about anything at all, it is that I ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Prologue and first chapter, first novel.
Hey there Lucas, Thanks for the notice. It would be easier to track, though, if you would send a 'private message (PM) and post the link, than an email :D ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)
Skinsy! I just saw that you've posted this. I'm first ! Yay! “I’m going out.” I said flatly, standing up. comma, not period. I wasn’t in the mood for my ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: The Stargazer {Part 1}
Hey there Pointe, Here as requested! The flag speared the ground. The white flag billowed up from the red, burnt, hot land. It blew in the hot wind. “Truce…. Truce” ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: No Forgiveness
Hey there, Vampyre. I'm not going to go through the nitpicks because Lupis did an excellent job of that. I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this piece. ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Untitled as of now
Hey there Coral, Here for a review! [quote ]“C’mon silly, before mommy and daddy wake up!” I scrambled out of my bed, rubbing the sleep from my scrunched up eyes. ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Motel 66 (chapter 1)
Hey Night, I'm Tanya :D “Okay, buddy, I’ll be right back. I want you to stay put, bolt the door, and don’t let anyone in. You got it?” She directed. ...
Dec 8, 2010
