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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Haunting of Elly Rose

    Wow. And Eww. You have creepy dreams, daughter. I don't know what to say. Did you want a review for this? I don't get why the dude asked how the ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Let's Just Say...

    Hey there Emoinpink, Thanks for the request! I think Tiger was giving me too much credit. *smiles* At first, I thought like Tiger that none of this made sense. Then, ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stargazer {part 2 }

    Hey Pointe! Here as requested! But next time, I would prefer if you would post on my WRFF thread (link in my signature) and post the link also; easier for ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Captive: Chapter 1 (Re-done)

    Hey there Jenny, Back for chapter 1! ;) It surprised Matthias that he was sweating on such a cold day. He could see a blood stain down the left side ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Captive (Part IV)

    Hi there Jenny, Thanks for letting me know about this! :D He woke to the soft morning light with the boy cradled against him. Light streamed in through the window. ...

    Dec 13, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]

    Hey Meep! Thanks for the request. I have no nitpicks, at all. The End. Haha, seriously, I loved this piece. It was simple and beautiful, and you showed us how ...

    Dec 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Deleted

    Kelsey; Yowzer! It would be swell if you could 'slip up' on some mistakes to make it look like I'm actually reviewing you. ;) Seriously, I found no mistakes at ...

    Dec 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Wild Ones Ch3 & Ch4

    Why is it that I wasn't told about this one? :'( ah, well. Just read all four of your chapters. As for nitpicks, the reviewer before me did a thorough ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Crux - Edited

    Jent, this was brilliant! If I hadn't know it was for a contest, I wouldn't have guessed. If I had to nitpick about anything at all, it is that I ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue and first chapter, first novel.

    Hey there Lucas, Thanks for the notice. It would be easier to track, though, if you would send a 'private message (PM) and post the link, than an email :D ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)

    Skinsy! I just saw that you've posted this. I'm first ! Yay! “I’m going out.” I said flatly, standing up. comma, not period. I wasn’t in the mood for my ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stargazer {Part 1}

    Hey there Pointe, Here as requested! The flag speared the ground. The white flag billowed up from the red, burnt, hot land. It blew in the hot wind. “Truce…. Truce” ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: No Forgiveness

    Hey there, Vampyre. I'm not going to go through the nitpicks because Lupis did an excellent job of that. I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this piece. ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Untitled as of now

    Hey there Coral, Here for a review! [quote ]“C’mon silly, before mommy and daddy wake up!” I scrambled out of my bed, rubbing the sleep from my scrunched up eyes. ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Motel 66 (chapter 1)

    Hey Night, I'm Tanya :D “Okay, buddy, I’ll be right back. I want you to stay put, bolt the door, and don’t let anyone in. You got it?” She directed. ...

    Dec 8, 2010


Poetry is like a bird, it ignores all frontiers.
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