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I understand the meaning but it feels as though you are holding back in your emotion. With lack of emotion it shows depression, but none can be absorbed in its ...

Thank you. I an a strong believer and I love your take on this. I kept it more ominous as to leave room for interpretation

Your potential is great but it feels as though you have sheltered your emotions. You need to break free and release your fears. Let it flow, don't let it be ...

Please try to find your way and dig a little more. You are very gifted but you need to expand. Being literal is conformed to figurative in this work

This is mighty interesting

The commas are an issue but the content is getting there.

I believe this to be a bit untrue, as if an alternate reality. It is no shelter but a portal of darkness