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Re: Me and You
i like it a lot. i agree completely with waiting until you're older to get married, to live your life to the fullest before settling down. my favorite lines are ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: All That You Took
i like it alot, kinda of an angry poem. i love angry poems, i only have one suggestion, instead of saying "fair to your word", i think it would be ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Who?
i like it. at first all the commas were annoying and i just went through it without pausing but then i went back and actually paused at the commas and ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Twilight : The real story
okay i'm gonna be honest, i didn't read the whole thing, only the dialogue, but i laughed my ass off! i'm a big twilight fan too, but let's admit, some ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Sunday Morning Death Parade
i really liked your poem. i really liked "I see London, I see France", at first it was a little confusing but after the last stanza it all comes together ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: A Scattering of Stars
okay first off, i saw that u live in dublin ireland, this is probably going to sound weird or lame to u but i want to go there so bad! ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Unnatural
i really liked this one, really deep, i know how you feel. 'A bug is here to feed the toads The plants to give clean air Fishes swim to feed ...
Jul 20, 2009
