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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Me and You

    i like it a lot. i agree completely with waiting until you're older to get married, to live your life to the fullest before settling down. my favorite lines are ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: All That You Took

    i like it alot, kinda of an angry poem. i love angry poems, i only have one suggestion, instead of saying "fair to your word", i think it would be ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Who?

    i like it. at first all the commas were annoying and i just went through it without pausing but then i went back and actually paused at the commas and ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Twilight : The real story

    okay i'm gonna be honest, i didn't read the whole thing, only the dialogue, but i laughed my ass off! i'm a big twilight fan too, but let's admit, some ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sunday Morning Death Parade

    i really liked your poem. i really liked "I see London, I see France", at first it was a little confusing but after the last stanza it all comes together ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Scattering of Stars

    okay first off, i saw that u live in dublin ireland, this is probably going to sound weird or lame to u but i want to go there so bad! ...

    Oct 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Unnatural

    i really liked this one, really deep, i know how you feel. 'A bug is here to feed the toads The plants to give clean air Fishes swim to feed ...

    Jul 20, 2009


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