bonafide

Amid the flowers of Imagination Flowers of your imagination? Why? Because it sounds pretty? I don't see how this connects to the rest of the poem, besides that the smiling ...

It's a poem, and please, for God's sake, don't write for other people to enjoy it unless you're making money off of it. Never will I say who I loved ...

Someday, preserves will save our lives, and when that comes they'll all be sorry they gave so much and kept so little. "they" is unclear. People in general? The small ...

Open your eyes. No wait, I take it back. Which is why it's good To open your ears. The poem would be better off without these lines. The only substantial ...

Let's fix some mechanics! Nothing more then 2 (I'd write out "two") dimensional [s]a[/s] shadow on a wall the light you see in the morning i (Capitalize?) quickly burn out ...

Firstly, repeating the "you still love him" message at the end of every stanza was redundant, and not particularly creatively versed, so I'd suggest you cut that format. You can't ...

Lines it could definitely do without: my life it sucked. No worries, I'll laugh it off. it's cool, it's cool: but no I've had enough! This words don't express the ...