bluitch

thank you for the reviews! I apologize for the mistakes in punctuation...I'm kind of new to this whole poetry thing, so hopefully it'll get better and I'm glad you guys ...

I really like the concept this poem has, and all the emotion behind it... I don't think you need to make any improvements! it's a great poem! I love it!

Not that smiling at other people's pain is a good thing, but we've all been through it. That's the kind of thing that makes a song good - we have ...