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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dear, YWS

    I really loved this poem. I think you perfectly explained each and every one of us here. It's great how you in the beginning it started out as critical as ...

    May 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Haikus of The Periodic Table of Elements

    Haha. I loved this poem. Nitrogen killed me. :) Like the reviewers above me said, I think you got Hydrogen and Helium mixed up. When I saw the symbols I ...

    Apr 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: What Girls Want~part one

    I liked this, but like a few reviewers above me stated, it did seem rushed through. There were many spelling/grammar mistakes that were already pointed out, so I won't say ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Once Upon A Time

    I really liked this story, and I could relate to it in many ways. "Once upon a time, you made me laugh. But you don't anymore. So I'm sorry, but ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Ghost Whistperer: Proluge

    This story was somewhat interesting, and it may have some potential if written right. The first paragraph should have been broken up into several. If you read a book with ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Death of Humpty Dumpty

    I just loved this story. It was well-written, and the fact that it came from another point of view made it even better. There was one thing I have to ...

    Mar 13, 2011


People find it far easier to forgive others for being wrong than being right.
— Albus Dumbledore