bluebird24

Hi there! Something key to remember, it is always better to show, not tell. So instead of saying "heal my broken soul", which can come across as cliche and flat, ...

Overall this poem is good. I feel like you could push it more though. The feelings of relief and subsequent let down could be so strongly expressed. Great job, keep ...

Hee-hee-hee, I have to disagree with you that it was not funny. I thought it had a funny, although slightly corny, punch line. I hope you expand this into a ...

I just wanted to say that I dont think a teenage boy would be that excited about getting married and having a kid.