bloodyblackrose

well short sonnets like these usually aren't broken into stanzas anyway, hence my block format. my rhyme scheme was: a, b, a, b, c, d, c, d, e, f, e, ...

thanks for the critiques. and yes, im aware i used some evanescence lyrics. that was the intent - - if you know the songs then you know the emotion behind ...

i like the moral your poem took. it was something different. and your rhyme scheme was simple but good. it was kind of sad, and melancholy. those kinds of poems ...

love love love love love love love love it. end of story.

intense. i LOVE IT! this is exactly my favorite type of writing. dont give it up and dont change it, no matter what anyone says.

ahhah well actually this poem was an assignment for english class last year. we were supposed to write a 'beatneck' (or however you spell it) poem, and those kinds of ...

well, firestarter, this is not "self-therapy". it is how i express my emotions, and if u dont like it, then dont read it. and yes, there are people out there ...

i thought it was really good. i totally could understand the pain you were feeling and what you were talking about. i could picture it in my mind as if ...