bloodybelle01

I don't think you're a stalker ;) And I like it when people are harsh :) The creepiness and un-realness were intended, there are mysterious forces at work..... all shall ...

It didn't sound harsh :) Others have also pointed that out... I originally wrote this for a competition and we had to mention that, but now that I can change ...

That's a good idea! I'll keep it in mind for when I'm editing later :)

Thank you! Yes, I probably should fill it out a bit more :) What do you mean by 'missed a hair'? Thank you for the encouragement and the wonderful compliment, ...

Interesting idea.... I will eventually (like, in a week) go back and revise this- I'll definitely keep your questions in mind... It wasn't actually supposed to be in modern times ...

Thank you! I might.... does one about Beauty and the Beast sound good? Are there any fairytales you would like to see?

Thanks :) I know it means 'to love'..... do you know how to make it into a noun? If not, it doesn't matter, I can look it up :) I'm ...

Thank you very much for the ideas and advice! Amare is a nickname. Do you have any idea how I could make that clear?

Thank you very much! There are already two other chapters out so feel free to read them ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it and I certainly will fix them :)

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You're very welcome!

Cool! And no problem, it was a pleasure to read :)

Ah, I see. And it was my pleasure :)

Not the dairy queen restaurants. Try the bakery, but I bet they won't be as good as my mums..... (they will probably but my mum is a ridiculously good baker).

I like your ending and your vocabulary (it makes for a wonderful read)! What do you mean with '(chapter somewhere near the beginning)' in the title? That confused me a ...