blobfacevincent

I was really taken by your story. The amount of work you put into it makes other stories look unprofessional. There was a lot of space in between the title ...

You spelled your'e wrong. its you're Thanks though for the feed back

I liked the content of the story and the way it started out. I liked how it started and how you wrote your first parts of the story an how ...

what is your real name. This is from bloby

I liked the info in your story but there are a few sentences that last a little to long. I also liked the description of the words you used and ...