blair93

this is very thought id give you a review. your poem is a bit looks like you go on this path..and your searching for somthing..but on the road you lose ...

i really like this even though the guy is taqlking about whats happening,its like hes talking about himself.you could tell what kind of person he is. with the news of ...

lol.i dont like to read stuff like this but your word has a pop of life in it. i think poetry like this reflects off the person.shows who you are. ...

omg i think im addicted. it was real good.but i think in the beganing you intorduced the story like it was complicated and used alot of big-words.than towards the end ...

i like the detail.but one.they just let him in? how old is he? how old dose he look? two.the guy just handed him the drink without a second thought? also ...

j'amie beaucoup. lol this kid is so funny.but i think he talks alot for an outsider with no friends.he has a lot of storys.maybe you should do a bit on ...