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Re: Book 1 (1)
sorry about the confusion with some things i stopped working on it for a while and then started again but i forgot what i had already written
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Book 1 (1)
this part can be a bit confusing so let me clairify. my version of vampires lose all of their human memories except for their last one. so Kami is unaware ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Book 1 (prologue)
Thanks for all the tips, grammar is really not my strong point. I always have to have my sister look it over and she's younger than me. I have an ...
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: ( Title Unknown) Chapter 1
This is really good, you say 'the dragon' a bit too much though, other than that I think that it's pretty well written *i feel really dumb, this post is ...
Aug 16, 2008
