birta

I really liked this chapter. I think your writing is great, there are a few typos but not a lot. overall this was great. I didn't feel like I was ...

this was very well written. it gradually got more intense as you read and you didin't know where this was going. I really liked this part: A body covered in ...

this is so powerfull. I really like this. your writing is very good :) I love the happily-ever-after-but-not-really ending. she gets to stay with Cole forever but not the way ...

the way you write the story. it's kind of impersonal, distant and straight forward. I really like that, you don't over dramatize every thing. you just tell it like it ...

this is amazing. I love this. the way you wrote it was mesmerizing. and the concept is so true. It probably shows that I have no idea how to write ...