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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Circle Of Stones- Chapter I

    I got your message and I'm here to review! So first off, I love your writing style. It is just somber enough to get the point across without being overly ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Love in Fear

    Wow. This is one of the most incredible poems I have read. This is so accurate about how I feel in love. The second person view really emphasizes the topic ...

    Feb 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: On Feeling Helpless

    Wow! This is really amazing. I love the second person, it really works with this piece. Also, I love the way you describe it, one of my best friends went ...

    Feb 2, 2015


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19