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Re: you are no longer the sun
Hi there! My name's Berrie, and I'll be reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Let's get started! :) Top Graham Cracker - Opening Thoughts: The narrator is speaking about ...
Feb 6, 2024 -
Re: the protector [i was not]
Hello!! My name is Berrie! I wanted to stop by and leave a review on your poem. Initial thoughts: This piece was so raw and heartfelt. I understood the emotions ...
Feb 5, 2024 -
Re: Blame
Hi! I saw your poem, and wanted to stop by and review it. This one really hit. Short, but right to the point. I can feel the punchiness and contempt ...
Jan 17, 2024 -
Re: My Half-Filled Plastic Bottle
I thought this poem was super clever. It did a great job combining complex and flowery language with a bit of a tongue-and-cheek concept overall - glorifying something like a ...
Jan 13, 2024 -
Re: Fate Undone- Prolouge
This is a really cool idea for a prologue. It feels purposefully vague, but you can still get a good idea of what the narrator's saying without getting lost or ...
Jan 13, 2024
