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berrie

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: you are no longer the sun

    Hi there! My name's Berrie, and I'll be reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Let's get started! :) Top Graham Cracker - Opening Thoughts: The narrator is speaking about ...

    Feb 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, Culture Re: the protector [i was not]

    Hello!! My name is Berrie! I wanted to stop by and leave a review on your poem. Initial thoughts: This piece was so raw and heartfelt. I understood the emotions ...

    Feb 5, 2024
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Blame

    Hi! I saw your poem, and wanted to stop by and review it. This one really hit. Short, but right to the point. I can feel the punchiness and contempt ...

    Jan 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Half-Filled Plastic Bottle

    I thought this poem was super clever. It did a great job combining complex and flowery language with a bit of a tongue-and-cheek concept overall - glorifying something like a ...

    Jan 13, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Fate Undone- Prolouge

    This is a really cool idea for a prologue. It feels purposefully vague, but you can still get a good idea of what the narrator's saying without getting lost or ...

    Jan 13, 2024


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