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Re: Curtain Call
Thank you for the review! I'll keep what you said about technical vocabulary in mind. The title was actually referencing the curtain call before a play, because that's the time ...
Oct 19, 2016 -
Re: A Beastly Summer Night
About the detaching head - Kip is a monster from Japanese folklore called a nukekubi. they look like normal people, but at night their heads detach and fly around, eating ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: Unique Ways to wish on Friendship Day
These are very lovely little messages with good sentiment behind them. I'll be keeping this bookmarked for when the day comes around! They flow pretty well, and they definitely convey ...
May 22, 2016 -
Re: Thanataphobic Thoughts
This is an amazing poem. While I personally do not experience this phobia, I was afraid of death when I was younger. The flow is pretty good and the meaning ...
May 21, 2016
