beginningtowrite

Thanks heaps everyone (: I am in the middle of writing part two of chapter two and then I am going to go back and edit it all properly. Also, ...

Thanks heaps for the reviews! As I said in the spoiler though this is only part one of chapter two, there is another section coming. I will be sure to ...

Bland? what do you mean by that? Sorry if that sounds rude haha xD And thank you (:

Thanks so much (: its good to see where i can improve! Thanks heaps and i'll keep you up to date (:'

Thanks for that! I will be sure to edit it soon, thanks for the review! :D

Thanks so much for your advice! I was actually considering doing an introduction/prologue but I couldn't figure out how to start it, so any suggestions there would be greatly appreciated ...

I'm sorry it wasn't intended that way! I was only harsh because I think that this story has loads of potential and I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait ...

Ooh, I will have to read that now! Hopefully it is as good as this one (:

This is an amazing first chapter! I loved how descriptive it was and I couldn't stop reading it! I can't wait to read the rest, keep up the great work ...

Haha so do I, they're like my best friend xD But yeah, I can't wait to read the rest of this! :D

Thanks for that (: And yes I realised as soon as I had posted it how confusing it was, even for me haha. Thanks for the kind words and suggestions ...