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Christ!!!!! I'm totally in love with this, just to ask, are you ever going to be a musician or are you by some chance planning on wasting this beautiful talent ...

awwwwwwwww Strange, I'm starting to love you more and more, this is just awesome! Except......I can't really jiggle off the feeling of forced rhyme in some lines. The rest flows ...

thanks so much, i don't usually do poetry, you know and I'm glad you were able to review, I'll work on something else and we'll see how it works out! ...

that's great, choose any of my works that excites you and give me just one review....how about that?

uuuuuuurggggghhhhh *groans loudly* this is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can we be friends? can you teach me to write like this? :D

LOL! You're welcome!

Awesome!!!!!! Tell them oooo! OK, should I just comment or review, I don't know. Well crafted, perfect work in progress. You just taught me the best lesson ever, in a ...

Thanks, that first part was put in late after the earlier critcism, good to know it had the desired effect

LOL! yay!! you did!

Thanks for having my back @dragonfphoenix however, I don't see the un-capitalized letters, could you point it out for me please?

Oh, I don't think only the girls get the blame, I've touched it up a little so, let's see......

thanks, I see your point, I'll try fixing it.

thanks! everyone deserves a POV! this is mine, it's sorta teenage *scratches back of head* :D

Thanks real much!

OK, i will send you a personal message