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Hey Millars :) Let's get right into this then! I didn't feel like there was anything particularly wrong with your writing, except maybe as Trident points out, you seem to ...

Hey Lulu! Welcome to YWS :) Hope you're finding everything ok. If you need any help then just let me know. So...Review time! On the plus side, your writing is ...

Hery Sherlock :) This was an interesting piece. I like how you've formatted it as diary entries because you get to see little snippets over a long period of time ...

Hi there Scribblebug! (cool name) Hope you're enjoying YWS :) Let's have a look at your stoooory. Nit-picks ahoy! 1 - 'The clouds thickened, closing the sun.' - Closing the ...

Hey there Ela :) Hope you've been enjoying YWS! But remember to get out there and have a look at other people's work. I'm sure they'd reaaaally love you and ...

Hey Awesome! Feels like I'm always reviewing your stuff lol Onwards we go! Nit picks ahoy - 1. - 'This is the only thing that you see with your yes' ...

Hey Anirban :) Let's have a look at this story then! Whilst the subject is interesting and pretty relatable to anyone on this site or anyone who is a writer/creator, ...

Hi Jalmoc :) Thought I'd come give this piece some love. It looks a little lonely at the moment. First thing I noticed is that this is quiiiite similar to ...

Hi opaquewillow :) I'm glad you seem so up for repaying a review for another writer! That's a good mindset to have. Onto the review! I've just going to cover ...

Hi jefferyffe :) Stopped by to have a look at your story. Nit picks ahoy! - 1. 'Snow slowly covers a fallen tree.' - This seemed tacked on the end ...

Hey there leaseal :) I quite liked this piece. It was actually written quite well and I felt the emotion that was in it and the pain of this father ...

Hey mihaivisan! After my little fail pre-reviewing this piece I am finally here. So let's get down to business! Nit-picks first I guess - 1. - 'The wind starts blowing ...

Hey there Angel :) So...I'm a little confused because this says Part 2 but for the life of me I can't find Part 1. Am I just being blind or ...

Hi there ShadedLight :) Just popped by to give your story a little more love! It looked a bit lonely. So I quite enjoyed reading this. As Tybalt said, it's ...

Hey Max! Just stopped by to give your story some love since it seems a little lonely here with no reviews! So instantly when reading this I just thought of ...