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Hi there Fortis! I've come to lift you out of the Green Room. Nit-picks ahoy! She sat a recess one day, on the bench that she sat on every day. ...

I've already told you that I love this and want you to write more! I enjoyed the snippet at the beginning as well that I hadn't read before. I like ...

I'm glad it was helpful! It's fine if you want Claire to see a nicer side of Lei but I would introduce this gradually. Right now you're trying to make ...

Hi Opaque :) Here as requested! First off - Do you realise you've posted the chapter twice? I got a bit confused for a moment when it said Chapter 2 ...

Hey therealme! As promised I popped by to have a look at your chapter :) So let's get down to business! Personally I don't think you need this prologue. It's ...

Hey Bob! *pulls self up into sitting position in her sick bed* Let's have a look then. Nit-picks ahoy! 1 - 'Murch strode out of the alley, raising his hood ...

Hey Kazzykay :) Welcome to YWS! Hope you're finding everything ok. Remember to have a look around at other people's work. It's the quickest way to make friends and ensure ...

Hey pinkrose :) Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying yourself. Remember to have a look around at other people's work when you have the time. It's the best way ...

Cadi writing! YAAAAY! Before I start, I just wanted to say that to my mind you have improved a lot since I last read some of your writing. I'm not ...

Hey Mistie! :) Came to have a look at your stoooory! One thing that struck me instantly was that you didn't set the scene enough. I mean through their interactions ...

Hey littleauthor :) Welcome to YWS! I hope that you're exploring the site and having a look at other people's work. I'm sure they're eager to hear from you! I'm ...

Hey storyisking :) Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying it. Remember to have a look around at other people's work. I'm sure they'd love you forever and if you ...

Hey gummiebaerrs :) Thought I'd come give this piece a little bit of love since it seemed lonely! I quite enjoyed the vibe of this story. The atmosphere of a ...

Hey Trident! Let's pay you pack for all the reviews you've been doing of late :) So I wanna start by saying that I really enjoyed your dialogue. I loved ...

BLINKEEEEHH!! Hi there :D Thought your piece here looked a little lonely so I came along to keep it company. I don't think I've read much if your writing before ...