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So I started reading this on a whim. Then I read all of it (well all there is of it). And then I realised that probably meant I should review ...

Lauren! I saw you posted and couldn't resist having a read :) Then I thought I might plunge in for a review? Comment? I don't know. Probably more like a ...

SAAAAACHEH! So like everyone else I'm finding it hard to not just scream at you about how much I love this story. I've already gushed to you like a crazy ...

LAUREN! Okay, let's get down to this! First of all. Dude, this is so so so awesome. I knew I would love this as soon as I read that wee ...

Hey there Tennant! Thought I'd pop by for a review. Actually my 250th review! Let's get down to this. So my main thought after I finished was just one of ...

Hey Chuck! Here as requested :) Just like Shpealwithit said, your main problem here is pacing. Everything is very rushed and this in turn makes it quite confusing. What it ...

IT'S THE THING. POST OFFICE. TSK! I probably wouldn't say this a review just a general 'I read the thing and here are some thinks and flailing!' I reaaaaaally like ...

Hey Nats! I'm baaaack again! Ok so the beginning of this part, right up until they get to the boathouse, was muuuuch better! I felt the presence of the monster ...

Hey Nats! Here I am again! I didn't realise there were two more parts when I was reviewing the first so sorry about that! What I said in the first ...

Hey there, Nats! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're finding everything ok and enjoying it here. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions and be sure to ...

Hi there Moonshadow! :) Welcome to YWS. Hope you're finding things ok. If you need any help then let me know! So from your description of this piece it seems ...

Hey Fortis! Here as requested :D I'm just going to do a general review because I didn't really find anything nit-picky. So! As Stella noted, this first chapter isn't very ...

Hi there Aquestioning! Just stopped by for a look :) Nit-picks ahoy! The War Room, transformed into an expedition chamber, for there were no more battles, no more hate, had ...

Hey jordin! Just stopped by to look at the beginning of your story in the hopes of dragging it out of the green room :) My instinctual feeling about this ...

Hey there GrenadeCatcher! Come to pull you free of the Green Room's clutches! The only couple of nit-picks I noticed were to do with your punctuation around dialogue. You miss ...