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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Someone Else's Secret

    Hi I like the poem its quiet interesting to read... I'm not sure if this is 'proper' but I noticed that you used only two stanzas and the second one ...

    Apr 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: God's Perfect Love

    Hi there I am Becca I like the concept or theme of the poem, that God loves us all. But I must say that I think it is too repetitious, ...

    Nov 13, 2015


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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